Daughter raped as payment 2
Loan sharks return and force dave to sodomise his daughter
One week later, the rain had stopped, but the air in the Wythenshawe flat still stank of mildew, old cum, and despair. Dave Hargreaves hadn’t slept properly since that night. His wrists were scabbed over from the cable ties, his eyes sunken and red-rimmed. He’d sold what little he could, the TV, PlayStation, Sophie’s old jewellery, but it barely scraped together two grand. The rest he’d drunk away in cheap vodka, trying to drown the memory of his daughter’s screams. Sophie barely spoke anymore. She stayed in her room with the curtains drawn, showered three times a day but still felt dirty, like the filth had seeped into her bones. She flinched at every noise, every creak of the floorboards. The bruises had faded to yellow, but the real damage was deeper.
At 2:47 a.m. the door flew open again. Same four cunts: Big Mick, Razor, Fat Tony, Knuckles. This time they brought extras, two more lads from their crew, tattooed and grinning, carrying a duffel bag that clinked with bottles and tools. They’d come prepared.
Dave was on the sofa, half-drunk, when they burst in. He didn’t even stand up, just stared, defeated. “I’ve got two grand,” he croaked. “Take it. Please.”
Big Mick laughed, kicking the coffee table over. “Two grand? After what we did to yer little princess last time? Nah, Davey. Interest’s compounded. We’re here to collect the rest… and then some.”
They dragged Sophie out of her bedroom by her hair. She was in an old T-shirt and knickers, no bra, tits swaying as she stumbled. She didn’t scream this time, just whimpered, eyes already glassy. “No… not again…”
“Oh yes again, ya filthy slag,” Razor snarled, slapping her arse hard enough to make her yelp. They threw her face-down on the carpet, right in front of Dave. Knuckles zip-tied her wrists behind her back, ankles together. She didn’t fight. Just lay there trembling.
Big Mick crouched beside Dave, grabbing his chin. “Here’s the deal, ya useless cunt. We’re gonna wreck this bitch so bad she’ll never walk straight again. But we’ll give ya one chance to make it stop. Beg us to let ya join in. Fuck yer own daughter’s arse while we watch. Do that, and we leave her alone for a month. Refuse… and we keep going till she’s bleeding out or knocked up with one of our bastards.”
Dave’s stomach lurched. “No… I can’t… she’s me girl…”
“Wrong answer.” Big Mick nodded to the new lads. They hauled Sophie up onto all fours, arse presented like meat on a slab. One of them, called Spike, pulled out a thick black dildo studded with metal bumps. “Warm her up first.”
They didn’t bother with lube. Spike rammed the toy straight into her cunt, dry, brutal. Sophie’s body jerked, a choked sob escaping. “Hurts… stop…” The bumps tore at her already-scarred walls; fresh blood trickled down her thighs almost immediately.
Dave watched in frozen horror as they worked the dildo in and out, twisting it, making her bleed more. “Please… don’t…”
Razor knelt behind her next, unzipping. His curved cock slapped against her arse cheek. “Double up time.” He shoved into her arse—no prep, no spit while Spike kept pumping the dildo in her cunt. Double penetration, rough and relentless. Sophie’s screams were hoarse now, voice cracked from the last time. Her body rocked between them, tits swinging, tears dripping onto the carpet.
“Feel that, ya raped little whore?” Razor grunted, slapping her arse red. “Two holes filled like the cum-dump ya are. Daddy’s watchin’ wave to him.”
Dave sobbed, head in his hands. “I’m sorry… Sophie, I’m so sorry…”
They swapped positions, Fat Tony taking her mouth while Knuckles replaced Razor in her arse. Knuckles’ massive cock stretched her beyond reason; her ring tore wider, prolapsing slightly with each brutal thrust. Blood and shit smeared his shaft. Sophie gagged on Fat Tony’s girth, vomit bubbling around her lips, but he just fucked her throat deeper.
“Choke on it, slag,” Fat Tony wheezed. “Swallow daddy’s debt.”
Dave couldn’t look away. His daughter reduced to a set of leaking holes, body jerking like a broken puppet. Her eyes met his once, empty, dead. No fight left. Just acceptance of the horror.
Big Mick leaned close to Dave’s ear. “She’s gone catatonic, mate. Look at her. We could kill her and she’d just lie there. One word from ya and it stops. Beg to fuck her arse. Do it.”
Dave shook his head, tears streaming. “I won’t… I can’t…”
Knuckles pulled out of her arse with a wet slurp, her hole gaping, red-raw, prolapsed flesh hanging. Spike yanked the dildo free, replaced it with his fist, knuckles-deep into her cunt, twisting. Sophie’s body convulsed, a thin wail escaping around Fat Tony’s cock.
“That’s it,” Big Mick said. “Fist the bitch till she bleeds out.”
Dave broke.
“Wait!” His voice cracked. “Stop… please. I’ll do it. Let me… let me fuck her. Just stop hurting her.”
The room went quiet except for Sophie’s ragged breathing.
Big Mick grinned. “Good lad.” He cut one of Dave’s hands free, left one. “Get over here. Guide yerself in. We’ll film it for the lads back home.”
Dave staggered forward, legs shaking. Sophie was still on all fours, arse up, holes wrecked and leaking. He knelt behind her, trembling fingers undoing his flies. His cock was soft, terror and shame killing any response, but Big Mick slapped it hard. “Get it up, ya sick cunt. Or we start again.”
Dave stroked himself frantically, tears falling onto Sophie’s back. Biology betrayed him; blood rushed, cock hardening despite everything. He positioned the head at her ruined arsehole, still gaping, slick with blood and cum.
“Sophie… love… I’m sorry…” he whispered.
She didn’t respond. Just stared ahead, vacant.
He pushed forward. The head slipped in easily, too easily, her arse already stretched and torn. Warm, wet, ruined flesh enveloped him. He sobbed as he sank deeper, feeling the damage he was adding to. Her walls clenched weakly around him, not from pleasure, but from pain.
“That’s it,” Razor laughed, phone recording. “Daddy’s finally paying his way. Fuck her harder, ya pathetic wanker.”
Dave thrust, slow at first, then harder as they jeered. Each pump made Sophie’s body jolt, fresh blood welling around his shaft. He hated himself, hated the sick heat building in his balls, the way his cock throbbed inside his own daughter’s destroyed hole.
“Cum in her, cunt,” Big Mick ordered. “Fill yer little girl up. Make her carry your shame.”
Dave’s thrusts turned erratic, shame and horror twisting into something vile. He came with a broken cry, hot spurts flooding her bowels, mixing with the mess already inside. He collapsed over her back, sobbing, cock still twitching inside her.
The gang laughed, zipping up. Big Mick kicked Dave off her. “One month. We’ll be back. And next time… bring friends.”
They left Sophie curled on the carpet, leaking from every hole, eyes open but unseeing. Dave crawled to her, cut her ties with shaking hands, pulled her into his arms.
“I’m sorry… I’m so sorry…”
She didn’t answer. Just stared at the wall.
The flat was silent except for their breathing and the drip of blood and cum onto the carpet.
Dave rocked her gently, broken beyond repair.
He’d paid the debt.
But the cost was everything.
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Comments (39)
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Reply↴ • uid:cyvrl1b0jPussygalore: We need a next part. And yes rescue her and her father from the gangsters.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5fopx6zjGunter Steinback: Next part written, hope you enjoy
• uid:1asl70ldt0iBrenda: Its really good to see bitch gets destroyed by her dad dave but yeah I think a happy ending should be given to Sophie. Just do the happy ending bro. Either now or in final part
Reply↴ • uid:h48a57b0dStopItGetSomeHelp: Wtf is with all this happy ending crap? 1) wrong site for feel good pervy sex stories 2) life doesnt always have happy endings.
• uid:1ek24gxvzmBig Daddy Dick: I'm glad daddy got to fuck her too this time , part 3 he gets to fuck her again
Reply↴ • uid:dhv9taiqlFrancis: Part 3 with a Happy ending for Sophie
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficAquatinted amka: If you’re continuing this, please save the girl. Let Sophie get rescued by a gentle good hearted man and actually get to marry him who treats her like a human being. No more pain. A happy life
Reply↴ • uid:59pman0hlRebecca: I also like Christy's idea for a happy ending, but instead of paying the debt, make the boy/man destroy the gang to save Sophie
Reply↴ • uid:38bqer49kRebecca: I am on happy ending's squad. She deserve a happy ending and her father a second chance. Please go with christy hammes idea. Please save the girl.
Reply↴ • uid:38bqer49kPO469: Could have made her suck her dad's limp cock to get him hard. A round hair brush could be fun to fuck her holes with.
Reply↴ • uid:1e72ya2bxpurGunter Steinback: Good idea
• uid:1asl70ldt0iAsiangirl: Can you please tell there cock size. I like to hear there size. Most people don’t tell but it turns most people on.
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• uid:2ruiuvthlBiBoy: Brilliant story, Gunter and some of your very best writing. No, you don't do happy endings. It just doesn't suit your style. Your stories are raw, visceral and go straight to the cock!! Great!!
Reply↴ • uid:8n9x2i3m9iOGTWINKLETOES: Seriously, is you can cum to shit like this, you need help in one way or another badly!! If there ends up being a "happy ending", she'll never be able to trust anyone enough for them to touch her ever again! I realize it's just a sorry, but I promise this has happened to someone, somewhere.
• uid:5z0pzy542The Wanker: Great descriptive and powerfully written story Gunter. Certainly one of your best. Ignore the happy ending brigade that seem to infest this site these days. Looking forward to when Big Mick returns with some friends to rape the shut out of the little slut. You get 5 stars from me,
Reply↴ • uid:8mna90mk09Rebecca: Wanker, if you don't like peoples opinion, why don't you make your own site and get the fuck out of here?
• uid:38bqer49kPerv Lover: Rebecca why dont you make your own site. This isn't a place where happy endings happen. This isn't one of yours novels you seem to like to read. Happy endings are BS
• uid:mzgqy4zlThe Wanker: Thank you Perv Lover. I am sick of reading these requests for happy endings. Happy endings have no place in this type of story, they are BS!
• uid:8mna90mk09Rebecca: Perv lover, its not up to you to decide and speak something new. Don't copy paste my dialogues on me. If you don't like happy ending comments then ignore them and if you can't then make your own site and get lost
• uid:38bqer49kKing: I agree with Wanker and Perv Lover, all these people begging for "happy endings" is fucking annoying. If you don't like what the author does with their story then rate it accordingly and go write your own shit! Buncha morons.
• uid:1d1l8fdepv6nAquatinted amka: Shut Up King
• uid:59pman0hlPerv Lover: Rebecca it's not your decision either, if you dont like the story then write your own damn story. Oh I bet it's so hard when you cant handle your own medicine just like you cant handle a dick. Get lost
• uid:mzgqy4zlRapeslut: @PervLover you are so hot. What is the title of your latest story?
• uid:1ejhefr4pumvPerv Lover: Heyy Rapeslut I really appreciate your attraction to me. I absolutely love your name you sexy whore. With regards to the story. I have been trying to upload a repost to my original story to make it more true to what actually happened however the site won't allow me to upload it. I've been trying for two weeks now. So I dont know if I will be able to upload again. Its very sad
• uid:mzgqy4zlRapeslut: @PervLover that is a damn shame girl we need to hear your stories.
• uid:1ejhefr4pumvPerv Lover: I know i really want to tell the world how my daddy rapes me
• uid:mzgqy4zlChristy Hammie: I would like to see a happy ending too Gunter steinback. It will be a unique Ending. Instead of typical regular "fuck forever" try to save sophie at the very end. Maybe a boy from her class or a good person who likes Sophie secretly. The damage is already done but at least if he (anyone) pay the debt and marry sophie, it will be a unique end and maybe happy ending too. I think thats a nice idea. Things can go worse, they can fuck her for months but its never too late to save her by a nice rich loving boy who will marry her and give her a good happy life as his wife. I am sure everyone will enjoy Dave and Sophie's reaction when the boy from her class saves her or pay her debt. Sophie and her father's gratitude and gratefulness and even shock when he propose Sophie.
Reply↴ • uid:3c3umj7m2Rebecca: Thats brilliant Christy ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
• uid:38bqer49kVix: Even if things get worse in next parts, can you at least keep the happy ending people asked? Maybe imafter 2-3 parts?
Reply↴ • uid:38bucg2qjGunter Steinback: Is it that bad Vix? Nobody has ever asked for a happy ending of me before. I will think about it for you guys....
• uid:1asl70ldt0iNadine: Gangrape happy ending? What the fuck? The point of the story is that nothing happy is happening, at least for the girl. But you want the end to be "...but after the gangrape, Sophie was very happy. At least if you don't count the rape part or the gang part."
• uid:8bvxopwwqlP230: Although I enjoyed the gangraped but I think its fair enough to give her a good ending now like Diego said. However, you can add one more gangrape before the rescuse. If you do, then include dogs then go with Diego happy ending idea.
Reply↴ • uid:t2pu7w9b0cGunter Steinback: I am glad you liked it. I may possibly do another chapter, but I don't do happy endings sadly.
• uid:1asl70ldt0iVix: Hi Gunter. I also like the story both parts but I would like to ask for a happy ending too just like others in the comments. Please do it if possible and thank you for two amazing parts. It was satisfying. And even if things get worse, can you keep the ending same? Someone save and marries her?
• uid:38bucg2qjDiego: You’re an amazing writer but my heart can’t take much more of this 😭 Can we get a redemption arc? Imagine her college crush hears about her situation through mutual friends, clears the whole debt in one go because he’s been doing well career wise, and saves whatever left in her from the gang. Months later when the pregnancy test is positive and she’s terrified, he just holds her, says the baby is theirs now no matter what, proposes with a diamond ring, and they actually build a new life together and get married.
Reply↴ • uid:2mut5bi8rbP230: Bro do you mind a last gangrape before the happy ending? I would like to see happy life too but one last gangrape before her crush or friend saves her.
• uid:t2pu7w9b0cGunter Steinback: Glad you liked it Diego. Sadly there is no happy ending. Things however may get worse.....
• uid:1asl70ldt0i