How I made Aditi my sex slave by blackmailing and Raping her part 8
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~[[[Ayushman - Age 21, In his last year of college. He is two years senior than Aditi. He is in the same batch as Akash. Ayushman belongs to a rich and wealthy family. His father is a senior judge in the state High Court. His house is Not near but in the same city as the college, so he has no need to stay in the hostel, and thus, he is totally unaware of the conditions of the girls in the college hostel. He is good and introvert in nature. He dont have much friends. Just 1-2 frineds.
He has a crush on Aditi from the first day he saw her in college. He used to see her whenever she was around him. For a few days, he just liked to see her. Once he even tried to talk with her, but he was unaware of what she was suffering in the hostel. Aditi had started to hate almost all the boys from last year. For her, there was no one whom she could trust or befriend. Aditi never gave attention to Ayushman. Even she was aware of how Ayushman followed her and looked at her. But she was already broken, so she had never even thought about him. Even once Aditi's friend told her about how Ayushman followed her, she told Aditi to go and talk with him, but Aditi is now even afraid to talk with boys. She knew about Ayushman's family background, but what if Akash knows that she told anyone about her?]]]~
Aditi told Riya about Ayushman, and Riya also thought that he could help in this matter if he understood the situation.
When Aditi and Riya saw from the window that everyone was coming towards her room, Riya decided to leave fast. But before leaving, Riya put her mobile on flight mode and hid it in a corner that couldn't be easily observed with camera on.
[[Around 11:55, Riya leaves to meet Ayushman, but first she has to find his address. She ran towards the college's main computer where she can find all student details.]]
After Riya leaves, Aditi lied on the bed and started to cry; she didn't even lock her room door. In two minutes, her room door opened, and one by one, everyone entered her room. Akash told her in a laughing tone, "So you have already kept the door open for us. How good a girl you are! See, we are all here to celebrate your birthday." When everyone was entering her room, all the students who had rooms around Aditi's room saw them enter. Everyone closed their doors in fear and started thinking about Aditi.
This is all happening, but Aditi didn't get up from her bed. Akash told her to get up for cake cutting, but she didn't get up. Then Raj told Akash, "Is this the way to ask a girl to get the cake ready? Wait, let me teach you." Raj goes towards Aditi, grabs her hair tightly and makes her sit on the bed. Then Raj asked everyone in a funny voice, "Who will rape the birthday girl first?, I should get the first chance as she is my lovely little sister." Aditi is wondering why she got the world's worst person as her brother. On this statement by Raj everyone started to laugh on her. Akash open the cake box and put it on table. Everyone start to sing birthday song. Then Akash come near Aditi, he hold her from her hair and throw her face into the cake. On that Vishakha ask " can i give her birthdays bump ?" Raj said of course. So Vishakha told other to make her lie on bed and hold her legs and hand tightly. Then vishkha went near Akash, she kiss Akash while opening his belt. Then she run her hand on his dick over his pant and told Akash to wait for more. Vishkha bent the belt one turn on her hand. Then with full power she hit the belt over Aditi's bum. That hit was so strong that mad Aditi struggle like fish out of water. But seeing this everyone got excited. During this all the boys has started to remove their clothes. Shweta asked the security guard to give her his security rod. Shweta took that rod and started to massage. Everyone understood what Shweta was going to do, so everyone was cheering for Shweta to go for it. Raj was teasing her, saying, "Please don't do this, she is my sister." Shweta some near Aditi and insert that rod in her which gave Aditi immens pain bu tthere is no one who can understand her pain. Then Raj requested everyone, "Please, guys, it's my sister's birthday; please let me fuck her." On that Akash and Raj started to fight who will rape birthday girl first. So shweta suggested both of them to fuck her togather. On that both Agree. Akash lied on bed then he bring Aditi on her and insert his dick in her vagina same time Raj got over her back and started to fuck her ass. During this Amit and Virat and security guard are massaging their dick and waiting for their turn.
Vishakha had sex with Amit and Akash befor but never with Virat. When she Saw Virat's dick, her mouth start watering so she wend near him and took his dick in her hand and started to stroke and started to kiss him by seeing this Amit went near Shweta, she understood and took Amits dick in her hand. By seeing all this Security guard ask both girls to also have his dick. Shweta and Vishkha both denied touching the security guard's dick because he is a security guard. They said that they will not even touch that black ugly man. That mad security guard Angry. At same time Raj and Akash finish 1 round. Akash saw that security guard is Angry so he told him to remove his anger on Aditi. Security gaurd first say some curse words to Shweta and Vishkha for not having his dick then He utter that now Aditi will pay for this. He go towards Aditi and without any reason he started to beat and slap Aditi. He kiss and bite on her lips so hard that he bite her lips and her lips started to bleed. While he was aligning his dick to her Vagina, Akash shout to wear Condom but Guard is in no mood to listne. He Started to fuck aditi. While fucking her he was, slaping her, biting her. He aslo bite on her ear that her ear started to bleed. Virat whisper in Akash's ear that " Even we had never rape her this Bruttaly" Aditi screamed so loud and painfully that even her neighboring roommates could hear, but no one had the courage to go there and help her.
Vishkha kneel on her knees and started to suck Virat's dick. That time Akash was stand near Virat so she Hold Akash dick in her hand. Amit ask to shweta to suck his dick. So Shweta started to suck him. Raj was seated on a chair and taking a rest.
[[ It's around 00:25. Riya has found the address and contact of Ayushman. She tried to call, but he didn't pick up. She quickly goes to her car and is going to his house. ]]
Virat ask Vishkha to stop sucking as he dont want cum in her mouth. He wants to bang Aditi with Fully Tight Dick. Security guard Rape Aditi mercilessly. When he is done he notice that Aditi is not moving. Due to extreme hitting Aditi go unconscious. Vishkha noticed that Raj was sleeping on the chair. So she silently go near him and took his dick in her mouth which make Raj to wake-up, vishakha sign him to seat with relax and enjoy. Then Virat go on bed and started to ride on Aditi. After Virat its Amit's turn. During this Soniya also joined them. When she saw Raj and vishakha sucking him, he gave him a smily look and laugh. She directly towards Akash who was near window smoking cigarette. She hold his dick and started to massage.
[[ Around 00:45, Riya reached Ayushman's house. Even without traffic and fast speed, it took her 20 minutes to reach. But his security guard didn't allow her to go in. Ayushman and his father were still awake and watching TV. After constant pleading, the security guard called the house phone, which his father picked up, and the security guard told him about the girl who urgently wanted to meet with Ayushman. His dad allowed the girl to come in and also called Ayushman.
Ayushman didn't recognize her, as they had never met before. Riya was shaking and had tears in her eyes, so they gave her a chair to sit on and some water. After that, they asked Riya about her problem. Then Riya told Ayushman and her father everything from the beginning. How they have raped her, other girls, and what is going on with Aditi. This made Ayushman totally clear why Aditi never talks with him. She also told them what could currently be happening with her right now. This made Ayushman totally angry and furious as he was going to kill all of them now. He told Riya to take him to Aditi. Seeing this, his father held his hand and told him to stop. Ayushman asked him how he could stop helping a girl. His father said, "Think before you act." If he took any action now, there was a chance that Aditi's life could be spoiled by her videos. So, he asked his father for a suggestion.
Seeing this, Riya told them that she has hidden her mobile in Aditi's room, if this can help. Riya told if we act now then we have chance to arrest all at one place at one time. Ayushman's father thought for a minute and he took his mobile and do some calls.
Around 01:00 Father told to Ayushman and Riya to Let's go to hostel. Then they All go to car and drive towards Hostel. They knows that it will still took them around 15-20 min to reach.
Due to his experience in this field, his father had already found a way to stop her videos before someone could upload and share them virally. After all, he is a senior judge in the state high court. He has already contact police along with cyber department. But inside even he is burning and feeling sad For Aditi.]]
In hostel Aditi was raping by all of them. She was now totaly unconscious. She has stop moving. Every person in room were naked. All the boys have raped her.
They have decided to do one more round. Raj asked Shweta if he could have his second round with her. By hearing this Shweta move towards his chair and she seat on his lap. She took his dick and started to jump. By sseing this, security guards ask same to Vishkha. But she again denied which made him more angry. Due to his dark and ugly face no one intrested in her. He dont want to fuck soniya as he has already fuck her before many times. He said to everyone that if Shweta or Vishkha anyone from both of them doesn't have sex with him then he will take out all his anger on aditi and told them he will rape her like she will ask for death. Raj is not interested in this as he is enjoying Vishkha's mouth. But even after hearing this, Shweta and Vishakha didn't give him attention. Amit and Virat got tensed as guard's face reaction doesnt seems right. Virat ask Akash to stop him but he say, maybe its her destiny let her suffer this pain. Guard got very angry so he has decided to took out his anger on Aditi. He move towards Akash whose smoking cigarette, he grab his cigarette from his hand and move towards Aditi. Aditi was lying on bed unconscious. First guard roam his hand on her back then he press cigarette flame on her butt, due to which Aditi wake up in sudden pain and scream. Her scream was so loud that her every floormate from different rooms must have heard. Then guard has starting to ride her hole and constantly punching her on her back. Viart told Akash and Raj to stop him or She will die for sure. But no one cares.
Suddenly Raj saw towards the entry gate; he saw 2-3 police jeeps and a van coming inside the hostel premises. He told this to everyone.
They got tense and started to worry. Akash went towards Aditi, grabbed her hair to lift her head and asked if she had called the police. But due to constant beating by the guard, she had gone unconscious again. They all started to wear clothes. Till then, Ayushman and Riya also reached. They all ran and hid in Shweta's room, which was on the same floor. Akash uttered that if Aditi had called the cops, then he would viral all her videos instantly. For that, he took out his mobile from his pocket. But he got angry when he saw there was no network on his mobile. Then he found out there was no signal on anyone's mobile. The police were already on the floor, and there was no other way to go out; now they were all stuck in Shweta's room. They did not even have a choice to run from the window, as it was the 4th floor. No one understood why no one had a signal on their mobile.( It was Ayushman's father who had already blocked all the network in the college premises with the help of cyber team.)
Riya led police and all directly to Aditi's room. When they enter they saw Aditi lying on bed naked with so many beating marks, biting marks, burning marks. Akash watched police go into Aditi's room from the keyhole. Riya took Aditi in her lap and started to pat her, but Aditi didn't reply. Ayushman took the blanket and wrapped her. Riya asked the police to call an ambulance. Without wasting time Ayushman lifted Aditi and ran towards his car. The police inspector ordered his two officers to go with them to clear the police process at the medical facility. Riya suddenly remembered something; she came back to the room and found her mobile, which was still in recording mode. She handed the mobile to Aditi's father and went with Ayushman. By seeing that video, the father and the police inspector both got super angry. In the video's end, they saw everyone running when the police arrived, so the police knew that they were still in the hostel. That time all the students from other rooms all came into lobby. From them one girl point her hand towards Shweta's room. Police ask to open the door but no one open so he order to break the door. He order to arrest everyone in the room.
Ayushman's father order officer to collect everyone's mobile. Then Inspector Order other officer to raid the room of all the rapist and collest theire extra mobile and there laptop, drives everything. Till then College head was also arrived to hostel. When he saw Officer taking Akash with him, he go towards Akash and Slap him.
When Police checke Akash laptop they found rape videos of more than 20 girls. Ayushman's Father decided that he will not leave even a single person.
Ayushman reached the hospital. He didn't even wait for a stretcher; he lifted Aditi and ran for help. Doctor Smita, who was there on the night shift, quickly reached them. By seeing Aditi's condition, she understood everything that had happened. The police officer who was with them told the doctor to treat her without wasting paperwork procedures. The doctor took Aditi in. Ayushman and Riya sat and waited outside the ward. When the doctor came out, she told Ayushman and Riya avout Aditi's condition. She had given Aditi some medicine so that she would wake up for at least 12-14 hours.
After few minutes Ayushman's father called him and ask about her condition. Then he told Ayushman that now he will insured that all the rapist will received what they deserve. And told him that " when Aditi awake told her That now she is Free."
In college, everyone seems happy due to this. Akash, Raj, Amit, Virat, guard, Vishakha, Shweta, and Soniya are all arrested. Aditi's father-Mother also got the news and are already on their way to the hospital. They are feeling shame that how their son could do this to his own sister.
Next morning scenario in the hostel. Some people are celebrating. Some people are paying for Aditi. It's already 10 AM, but Aditi hasn't woken yet. Riya and Ayushman are still waiting outside the ward without going anywhere.
Approximately around 11 AM, the nurse came and said that the patient had woken up........................
[One chapter has ended, but not the story.........]
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Comments (143)
Ben: This is fucking awsome. Aditi is so lucky. Thank you Ayushman. You're a savior. Brilliantly written.
Reply↴ • uid:t2pu7wqficArushi: Dear Author. I made a sample of their conversation. Take idea from it but write completely in your own words. Its just a sample from me to help you. And just reminding again one last time of what I desperately want you to include - 1. Ayushman and Aditi first love talk when Aditi wake up. (No riya or no parents for first conversation) 2. Riya and Aditi solo conversation after that (only Ayushman there) 3. Aditi and her parents talk (Ayushman and Riya can stay) 4. Ayushman's Father (Aditi's future father in law😅) and Aditi talk. Ayushman father add this line "so you are the girl who stole my son's heart" 😅😅 and then Ayushman's father assure Aditi that all akash and gang will be in jail forever. 5. Ayushman meet Aditi again, touch her ciggerate mark made by Akash and cry. 6. Ayushman gives a big surprise to Aditi that her fathers debt are now fulfilled by Ayushman. ( include Aditi's father reaction too) 7.Aditi and Ayushman kiss each others and then finally they get married and live happily. Extra :- Ayushman gift a beautiful diamond ring to Aditi. Thank you. You can add more romantic stuff whatever comes in your mind. I'm grateful to you for gifting us a happy ending. Thank you so much.
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu0k09I am not Author: Thanks Ayushi for getting so much involved in this story line. Tomorrow Next part maybe upload as this time I ma not writing. My female friend is writing. And trust me she has literally write a love poem type part. You will surly like.
• uid:5q9h1o7yb0dArushi: Thanks you so much. It means a lot to me.
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Arushi: Thanks again lol. Its been a while
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Arushi: This is just a sample. Please write in your own words in detail and long So after writing an entire paragraph, you want me to write the conversation as well? Fine. Anything to see Aditi and Ayushman as a happy couple. Here I go - Aditi is laying on bed and slowly opend her eyes and see the face of Ayushman and Riya. Ayushman is holding Aditi's hand and crying continuously. Aditi remembers the nightmare she faced yesterday and every incident come to her mind one by one. She screams and start shaking and crying. Ayushman firmly hug her and said "Don't worry Aditi. I'm with you. Nobody can even touch you now." Aditi in complete shock. The most rich and handsome boy from her class hugging her and saying these. Aditi's body is completely broken. Aditi "Ayushman Its hurting" Ayushamn "Oh I'm really sorry." Ayushman firmly lay Aditi on bed again. Aditi looking at Ayushman as if she is looking at er prince. Ayushman said "Why are you looking at me Aditi? Don't worry. My father took care of Akash and your brother." Riya " Yes. - Then riya tells everything in short what happend( tell aditi everything in summery and its up to you author. Glorify Ayushman) Aditi start crying and Ayushman hug her and kiss her forehead and said "Don't cry Aditi. I am with you. I will take care of you." Aditi still has no Idea that Ayushman still loves her even with her broken used body. There is still cigarette mark visible on her ass and other places. Ayushman: And Don't worry Aditi. Your all evidences are gone. Police took care of them. You are completely free now. And I am another good news" Aditi only looking at Ayushman in wet eyes . She still can't believe the nightmare is over and all thanks to Ayushman. Ayushman: We also took care of your father's debt. Ayushman hand over the papers 📃 Ayushi: Ayushman ... 🥺..I... Ayushman: Oh don't look at me like that. You know how Much I like u
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu0k09Arushi: Ayushman: You don't need to be sad anymore. I will take care of you from now on. Now take rest Aditi. Your parents are outside and my dad is also there. Riya's parents are here as well. Riya's parents wants to thank you. Now Riya is free as well and you have earned a loyal life long friend. Riya: Aditi.. thank you. I never thought I could come out of this but you and your amazing secret admirer helped me. I'm so happy for you and Ayushman. You can call me anytime if you need and you are always welcome in my house. I would love to make you my life long best friend. I'm so happy for u and Ayushman Aditi: Wait? Me and Ayushman? Ayushman comes and pinch her cheeks and said " Obviously. Me and you" Aditi: But.. but.. i was .. GangRa.. Ayushman: Its all right. Nothing can stop me from loving the girl I love Aditi: Love... me??.. please tell me its a dream... . Riya and Ayushman smiles and said " No. This is reality. Riya: Even I can't believe Ayushman still loves you after that one year of nightmare... These kind of loves are rare. You are so lucky Aditi. I am so so happy. Ayushamn: Its alright. Don't make me a great man now. Riya: If you have any friend like you then you can set me up with him. If he is as great as you. Ayushamn laugh and said "Sure. I have a cousin." Ayushman: So Aditi. Take rest and I have to take care of you for 6 weeks so you can be completely back to normal. You will be staying in my room. Its one of the most luxurious room in this city so you can feel comfortable. Aditi just looking at Ayushman like a statue in disbelief that anyone can still love her.. After 1 year of unthinkable gangbangs and even extreme bdsm by those girls and boys. Ayushman: I said I don't care about what happened and how many men **** you. I simply love you. Go like this.
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Fuck this shit: Love story??? Go watch titanic you fuvkin morons
Reply↴ • uid:jkzq014oicCasey: (And 5 star for the happy turn)
Reply↴ • uid:38bqer20cCasey: . The reaction of Aditi is going to be a pure gold. Make Ayushman tell her the truth that she is free. Capture the golden reaction
Reply↴ • uid:38bqer20cMegan: Yes. I am waiting for the best episode
• uid:38bw15u8lArushi: I already requested
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Id: Seriously?? Love story?? Fucking idiots
Reply↴ • uid:cmftspdm9bNoa Argamani: Poor Aditi.. It was extreme at first but relief at later part. Combination of both. Excellent writing and best plot twist
Reply↴ • uid:1m5y0lg8rbRangerfan5156: You did an amazing job author. I like the twist. Can't wait to see aditi wake up and the love story begins.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5fofsmm4B.R.I.T.N.E.Y.: Carol !! I've never seen you this active !! I guess Rocky buried his 8-inch bone deep inside your sweet cunt ! Lol , Britney
Reply↴ • uid:1cr5cbcb27n4The real Carol: Author ayuis idea is the best idea and insanely popular. Kindly change and make bigger better and wider. I loved this part and I loved ayshis suggestions most.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5fopwu41The real Carol: Arisbi please tell him how to make conversations. I am in love with yohr idea. Please let us know how to write conversation.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5fopwu41I am not Author: I can write story but Conversation????? But will try .
Reply↴ • uid:1eskmvy8ptrwThe real Carol: Let me show you some conversations and I really want ayihis idea. Aditi : Where... Where am I?? She Remembers the horrible incident they were doing to her one after another and push cigerrate in her ass. She start crying but she saw Ayushman 😧. Ayushman comes and hold her hands and say calmly Ayushamn: aditi.. Are you ok? Oh god.. Ayshi help please. You write a whole essay. Please help again. I never write conversations..
• uid:1m5fopwu41The real Carol: Bro don't rush. Go slowly. Next part can be the best one. Go slowly and follow ayhis lead. She wrote an eassay on how things should. Go and I loved it
• uid:1m5fopwu41Rangerfan5156: I think you should do dialogue writing. Something like that. I don't know.
• uid:1m5fofsmm4Casey: Do your best
• uid:38bqer20cArushi: I can help. I will give you a sample. But its just a sample ok? Just take Idea from my writing.
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09I am not Author: 100+ Comments, seriously........I thought to upload part 9 as it is i have written but I dont think anyone will like as everyone want Aditi and Ayushamn talk. So i have to change entire part 9.
Reply↴ • uid:1eskmvy8ptrwOip: No way please don't make it a love story, people come here to read erotic stories not stupid love stories
• uid:6hfu7wcm9jOip: Don't change atleast upload it as different version
• uid:6hfu7wcm9jThe real Carol: Please make it a love story please
• uid:1m5fopwu41The real Carol: Yes ease change please please
• uid:1m5fopwu41The real Carol: We all want Ayuhis idea come true. Please
• uid:1m5fopwu41Rangerfan5156: You deserve all the appreciation for the love story turn
• uid:1m5fofsmm4Arushi: Thank you. Please change it. I really appreciate
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Jlo: Oh boy.. The security guard is the worst. I bet Ayushman is fuming but atleast Aditi is saved. Lets go Ayushman. Show your love to your Crush Aditi 😍
Reply↴ • uid:6o7ptpzmGwen: Ok I am really invested in this story and waiting to see the love between Aditi and Ayushman. I've read the comments. I think I want the same what Arushi wants. But I want a little bit change or maybe include. As you know that Aditi has burn mark on her ass by security guard. I want to see the reaction of Aditi when doctors says to Ayushman that Ayushman has to change the bandage of her ass burn mark in every 6 hours and Aditi turn red. The moment will be a pure bliss of love between them. I really pray Ayushman treat Aditi like a Queen. The love any girl wants from life etc
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclzrcBluebird 517: This story is everything. Aditi faced a lot for 8 chapters. Can't wait to see the best ending for Aditi and Ayushman together. Chapter 9 will be the best one in this story for me
Reply↴ • uid:6gngti42Bluebird 517: Next part is out guys
• uid:38blmje43Make Aditi Suffer: Aditi should be rped by doctors ward boys and by Ayushman's father too. Make Ayushman fall in love with Riya. How can he accept a girl who was gngrp.
Reply↴ • uid:5rb2rj40Aditi father: Yeah , I agree with you . It's a fictional character make her suffer more
• uid:2dzsjxwv99Bluebird 517: Stop ruining one of the best ending.
• uid:6gngti42Ayushman: Yes, why would I will go for Aditi a rpd girl. Riya is Hotter. I don't care about Aditi.
• uid:1eskmvy8ptrwThe real Carol: Aditi ❤️ Ayushman
• uid:1m5fopwu41Hulk: There is a fan of yours in the comment section. Arushi. I think she gave the best idea. Scroll down a bit and you may find her. Can you please do that for next part?
Reply↴ • uid:1360jpvm9jHulk: That was hot. Eagerly waiting for the happiest part of the story
Reply↴ • uid:1360jpvm9jOreo: Make her suck BBCs
Reply↴ • uid:jkzq014oidDawson: Lets go girl. Waiting for Aditi to win everything in her life.
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no141Dawson: It will be the big beautiful happy ending. A happy ending so big and beautiful that nobody has ever seen.
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no141Guys: Seriously after reading all your comments?? Feeling pity for aditi.?? Whatttt??? This is fictional. Make it erotic
Reply↴ • uid:6hfu7wcm9dErotica: Seriously happy ending? People come her to read some erotic stuff , not a love story... not a happy ending
Reply↴ • uid:6hfu7wcm9dArushi: Just a small remainder one last time what I desperately want you to include - 1. Ayushman and Aditi first love talk when Aditi wake up. (No riya or no parents for first conversation) 2. Riya and Aditi solo conversation after that (only Ayushman there) 3. Aditi and her parents talk (Ayushman and Riya can stay) 4. Ayushman's Father (Aditi's future father in law😅) and Aditi talk. Ayushman father add this line "so you are the girl who stole my son's heart" 😅😅 and then Ayushman's father assure Aditi that all akash and gang will be in jail forever. 5. Ayushman meet Aditi again, touch her ciggerate mark made by Akash and cry. 6. Ayushman gives a big surprise to Aditi that her fathers debt are now fulfilled by Ayushman. ( include Aditi's father reaction too) 7.Aditi and Ayushman kiss each others and then finally they get married and live happily. Extra :- Ayushman gift a beautiful diamond ring to Aditi. Thank you. Have a nice day and great trip.
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu0k09Rubio/Vance2028: I second that arushi. Perfectly written. Golden scipt for me.
• uid:ev8sntm9aLemon: Arishi can you add what happend to akash and others? I want to see them getting Ayushman's wrath for doing this to his love Aditi. Amazing advice Ayushi. Loved all your points and the diamond ring part will be one if the best part of the story
• uid:1360jpvm9iLemon: I don't think next part will be the final part considering your gigantic paragraph but lets see. Thanks for the good work Arushi
• uid:1360jpvm9iI am not Author: Arushi ji, please wait. You have made more efforts in writing comments than I do to write a story. I have to find a way to blend suggestions into the story. So give me 2-3 days. This Sunday is i will return ho.e then I will edit 8th part to make part according to suggestion which everyone wants.
• uid:1cw9f4q7xq3eDumini: Well done Arushi. And thank you author
• uid:h48a5820aP230: I vote in favour of Arushi's suggestion regarding this story. She almost suggested everything I wanted. The ultimate happy ending.
Reply↴ • uid:1ngz6naqArushi: Thanks P230. Much appreciated
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Sakib: It will be a big beaitiful happy ending. Thanks man
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbArron: To be honest, I was feeling bad for aditi. Glad she is now in safe hands. Riya and ayushman saved aditi in time. That mad guard really used cigerrate on her ass. Fuck. I wonder what would ayushman think when he see the burn mark on aditi's ass. I would like to see ayushman softly put kiss her forehead and tell aditi that he is sorry for being late. Great story overcall.
Reply↴ • uid:2pdvucf2v2Arushi: I'm extremely sorry for commenting too much... I just can't hold my emotions properly.. I'll just remind you my points with one final comment in case you forget any point/conversation. Please read - 1. Ayushman and Aditi first love talk when Aditi wake up. (No riya or no parents for first conversation) 2. Riya and Aditi solo conversation after that (only Ayushman there) 3. Aditi and her parents talk (Ayushman and Riya can stay) 4. Ayushman's Father (Aditi's future father in law😅) and Aditi talk. Ayushman father add this line "so you are the girl who stole my son's heart" 😅😅 and then Ayushman's father assure Aditi that all akash and gang will be in jail forever. 5. Ayushman meet Aditi again, touch her ciggerate mark made by Akash and cry. 6. Ayushman gives a big surprise to Aditi that her fathers debt are now fulfilled by Ayushman. ( include Aditi's father reaction too) 7.Aditi and Ayushman kiss each others and then finally they get married and live happily. I can't believe how cute this thing is going to be. Too much cute to end in 1 part. I love this story.. No wonder people are going crazy over this story. Kindly reply me. You're a brilliant writer. And yeah Riya can stay as Aditi's best friend forever as well. And enjoy your trip with your girlfriend and take your time. I can wait forever. This is one of the best story I've ever read. I literary blussed many times when Ayushman came for Aditi and his father doing his best to save Aditi. Even our name sounds similar. Arushi Ayushman Aditi. Take your time and make sure you make the longest part with full of romance sweetness and all. Thank you so much.
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu0k09I am not Author: The size of your comment itself is a mini story. 🤣🤣
• uid:8f1joep8xwpI am not Author: I dont want to disappoint but I am convince with Jitu from Videocon. Read his below comment. This thing will make story fictional story. Its story that's why Aditi is going to have justice. In real life, no girls get justice after getting r*p*. Specially from country we belong.
• uid:8f1joep8xwpI am not Author: Don't make it bollywood style
• uid:8f1joep8xwpI am not Author: 1st part is almost written . Due to family trip in haven't upload it yet.
• uid:8f1joep8xwpP230: Damn. You said everything that was in my heart. I'm not author please do it the way Arushi suggested.
• uid:1ngz6naqP230: Aarushi suggested everything that was in my mind and I wanted. Please do this. Make it Bollywood style if its bollywood style (even though i like hollywood more
• uid:1ngz6naqI am not Author: Then I have to edit part 8. As i haven't put any specific conversation between Ayush and Aditi
• uid:5rb2rj40I am not Author: My focus was part 9 , Sex night between Aditi and Ayushman on farewell party of last year. Which Aslo last year for Ayushman. So i have to go back on part 8 again
• uid:5rb2rj40Roy: Bro do the edit please. I also love to hear the conversations. Arushu made an entire scipt. Lets appreciate her effort too lol.
• uid:o0hvmilhrbArushi: Thank you author. It means a lot. God bless you ❤️
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Arushi: This is the Original Ending we want and deserve 🥺. Just look at the comment section or look at the ratings. We all want to see Ayushman and Aditi happy as a lovely couple.. And Riya as Aditi's life long loyal friend.. This part almost made me cry.. I don't know if you are happy or not but I bet 99% of your readers are more than happy with this happy ending.. 😫😩..I just can't explain you how I feel.. Maybe I am too emotional.. But judging by the comments, I am not alone... Thank you so so much... i am so grateful to you..
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu0k09Arushi: Thank you again. I replied you. Please read -
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu0k09Arushi: Actually never mind. I'll writie my comment again so you don't meed tk scroll down. Just read my newest comment.
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09L: This is a very positive twist. Finally Ayushman saved his love. Amazing turn
Reply↴ • uid:38avcvw43Arushi: Ok I really love Ayushman and Aditi and I agree with Manchester21 in the comment section. We need these sweet conversations. I know it will be a long part but lets have it please. 1. Ayushman and Aditi first love talk when Aditi wake up. (No riya or no parents for first conversation) 2. Riya and Aditi solo conversation after that (only Ayushman there) 3. Aditi and her parents talk (Ayushman and Riya can stay) 4. Ayushman's Father (Aditi's future father in law😅) and Aditi talk. Ayushman father add this line "so you are the girl who stole my son's heart" 😅😅 and then Ayushman's father assure Aditi that all akash and gang will be in jail forever. 5. Ayushman meet Aditi again, touch her ciggerate mark made by Akash and cry. 6. Ayushman gives a big surprise to Aditi that her fathers debt are now fulfilled by Ayushman. ( include Aditi's father reaction too) 7.Aditi and Ayushman kiss each others and then finally they get married and live happily. I can't believe how cute this thing is going to be. Too much cute to end in 1 part. I love this story.. No wonder people are going crazy over this story. Kindly reply me. You're a brilliant writer. And yeah Riya can stay as Aditi's best friend forever as well. And enjoy your trip with your girlfriend and take your time. I can wait forever. This is one of the best story I've ever read. I literary blussed many times when Ayushman came for Aditi and his father doing his best to save Aditi. Even our name sounds similar. Arushi Ayushman Aditi. Take your time and make sure you make the longest part with full of romance sweetness and all. Thank you so much.
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu0k09I am not Author: Damn....She has prepared the entire script... Part of it is almost half written. And there is a group conversation of Aditi, Riya, and Ayush. Then Riya leaves. Then a little emotional conversation. Aditi welcomed in the hostel with a celebration. And dinner night of Aditi and Ayush which end with sensual kiss. And in next part is all about erotic sex between Aditi and Ayush.( which is inspire from my own 1st time experience with my gf)
• uid:5rb2rj42Arushi: Thank you so much Author. I was so excited that I couldn't stop myself. I can't express how good Ayushman and Aditi looks together. Please make sure you include that Riya is now Aditi's best friend and Aditi made a life long loyal Friend named Riya. Ayushman and Aditi together make Riya happy again as well. And please don't forget the marriage of Aditi and Ayushman. And also how Ayushman take care of Aditi's debt. A pure bliss moment. I might cry in happiness... I can read Aditi and Ayushman love story all day.. Make It as big as possible. Everything Detailed and described. Take all the time you need. And finally a final scene at the end of the story where Aditi Ayushman and Riya and Riya's husband going on a picnic with Ther children. A complete lovely ending. happiness overloaded.
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09I am not Author: I have written a rape story which was inspire from episode of crime tv serial. Which has original ending of Aditi commit su***de. Akash and friends walk away freely. But this comment section has made this story a fantasy love story. And even I don't know why am I writing a love story.
• uid:5rb2rj42Jitu From Videocon: Arushi ji. Apne suggestions to bahot diye. But this is reality on bollywood movie. Your suggestion look like bollywood movie. In real life this things never happened. Writer has done best to make it look real. No unnecessary drama and scenes.thats why people's afe engaging.
• uid:mx2vr1e8jJitu From Videocon: Hello Arushi. Don't get over exited and dont make it like dream. The points you have given are only possible in bollywood movies. Not in real life. The writer of this story has written it perfectly by keeping realism. No over heroic by Ayushman or Riya. Perfect experience plan execution by Father. So We should expect next story which portray realism and Sexual connection of Aditi and Ayush.
• uid:mx2vr1e8jArushi: Aapko hindi bhi aati hain..? I don't care. This is the Original Ending we want and deserve 🥺. Just look at the comment section or look at the ratings. We all want to see Ayushman and Aditi happy as a lovely couple.. And Riya as Aditi's life long loyal friend.. This part almost made me cry.. I don't know if you are happy or not but I bet 99% of your readers are more than happy with this happy ending.. 😫😩..I just can't explain you how I feel.. Maybe I am too emotional.. But judging by the comments, I am not alone.. Please read my first 2 comments again in case you miss any point of the story. Thank you so so much... i am so grateful to you..
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Pam: Why happy ending
Reply↴ • uid:6hfu7wcm9jShaktiman: Even I am thinking why happy Ending. I want to see Aditi suffer more. I read stories on this page to find something erotic not pathetic love story.
• uid:mx2vr1e8jShaktiman: I have best Suggestion. Ayushman father got boner while seeing Aditi nude lying on bed. He will send Ayushman and Riya home for relax. Then he will go inside and make unconscious Aditi nude then he will rape her. That time Wardboy see this. So he also join. Then doctor. Then other patient. Aditi got rape in hospital entire day.
• uid:mx2vr1e8jRangerfan5156: SHUT UP YOU FOOLS
• uid:1m5fofsmm4Arushi: Ok I really love Ayushman and Aditi and I agree with Manchester21 right under my comment. We need these sweet conversations. I know it will be a long part but lets have it please. 1. Ayushman and Aditi first love talk when Aditi wake up. (No riya or no parents for first conversation) 2. Riya and Aditi solo conversation after that (only Ayushman there) 3. Aditi and her parents talk (Ayushman and Riya can stay) 4. Ayushman's Father (Aditi's future father in law😅) and Aditi talk. Ayushman father add this line "so you are the girl who stole my son's heart" 😅😅 and then Ayushman's father assure Aditi that all akash and gang will be in jail forever. 5. Ayushman meet Aditi again, touch her ciggerate mark made by Akash and cry. 6. Ayushman gives a big surprise to Aditi that her fathers debt are now fulfilled by Ayushman. ( include Aditi's father reaction too) 7.Aditi and Ayushman kiss each others and then finally they get married and live happily. I can't believe how cute this thing is going to be. Too much cute to end in 1 part. I love this story.. No wonder people are going crazy over this story. Kindly reply me. You're a brilliant writer. And yeah Riya can stay as Aditi's best friend forever as well. And enjoy your trip with your girlfriend and take your time. I can wait forever. This is one of the best story I've ever read. I literary blussed many times when Ayushman came for Aditi and his father doing his best to save Aditi. Even our name sounds similar. Arushi Ayushman Aditi. Take your time and make sure you make the longest part with full of romance sweetness and all. Thank you so much.
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu0k09Manchester21: Ayushman's father is a sharm man. I had goosebumps when you said how angry the policemen and Ayushman's father was watching what they did to aditi on riya's phone. Please don't make aditi's parents interfere before the lovely conversation between aditi and ayushman. Make it detailed. Then conversation between riya and aditi. Then conversation between three of them and later ayushman ask aditi to marry her and ayushman's father conversion with aditi and ayushman too
Reply↴ • uid:38bqer49aRoy: Hey bro you didn't reply me. It was a excellent part but where is the best scene when Ayushman take care of Aditi and tells Aditi how much he loves her? Infact Riya shoukd thank Aditi because of Aditi, Riya is free now. I can't tell how Excited i was for this scene. Where is the best scene bro??
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbI am not Author: I am on family trip, so can't think and write in one go. That's why next part is still pending. I want to make next part full of erotic between Aditi and Ayushman. I am writing my own first time actual sx experience of me and my gf. Will upload in 4-5 days.
• uid:5rb2rj42Roy: Oh. Enjoy your time. No hurry. Thank you man. You're a great person. Have a nice holiday 😀 💙
• uid:o0hvmilhrbRoy: Don't rush. We can wait 1-2 weeks. Its not a big deal. Enjoy your time and then write calmly with a fresh mind. Thanks and have a nice holiday 😀💙
• uid:o0hvmilhrbNatalia: Reading from Israel. One of the best story. Waiting for next part. I see Ayushman as prince and Aditi as princess. Make next part bigger with full of romance, love and happyness
Reply↴ • uid:1o1xb9lzrcNatalia: Thank you for happy ending and love angle of ayushman and aditi. ❤️😊
• uid:1o1xb9lzrcI am not Author: Seriously, my story reach to Israel readers. Thanx.
• uid:5rb2rj42Roy: Love Israel 🇮🇱 from India 🇮🇳
• uid:o0hvmilhrbArushi: Love from India for Israel.
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Ter: Why happy ending whyyy this is fictional and make it brutal
Reply↴ • uid:1cw4pl2flcvxWohoo: Same why happy ending. Let's make Aditi rape by hospital warden. Then Aditi went home with her father where her Father rape her in their Farm as punishment. Plz , Aditi don't deserve happiness. She must suffer till she lives. Ayushman father should make copy of videos to later blackmail Aditi.
• uid:5rb2rj42Arushi: You Peoples never focus on details do you? Aditi is middle class. Her father has no farm house. Aditi tried to end her many times but only reason she didn’t is her father's debt. A happy ending is perfect ending for this story. Kindly let her have Ayushman and a happy life. Thank you.
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Aunty lover: Damn story is hot and ending is perfect
Reply↴ • uid:1duzbxm2k8n0Stacy: Author, I liked this part of the story the most. Please bring another part where Aditi opens her eyes and sees Ayushman crying on her side and on the other side Riya is holding Aditi's hand. Finally Ayushman confesses his love to his crush and Aditi cannot believe that even after all this, someone can love her so much. You have written this part very well and probably the next part will be even better. It was Marvelous
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclzrjI am not Author: While writing i didn't know readers like this story this much. My previous all 3 parts come in the list of last day previous story. And so many comments. I have already started to write further story but I am not in town so can't finish and upload next part.
• uid:1eot1cg2b88bSammy: Thank god Aditi is safe.. Fuck the guard, Shweta Vishkha and Akash. I want to see them cry while Aditi lead a very happy life with Ayshman and they stay jealous behind bars.
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no144Biboy: Your foreshadowing is really good. When her brother did that, she said "I guess all boys are same". I remember that line. So this is the reason why Aditi never gave ayush a chance. makes sense. amazing part. I'm glad The dark days are over for Aditi. I can't believe how amazingly you have written the saving part. Next part will me more Amazing. The reaction on Aditi's face knowing its all over and a handsome rich boy saved her and loves her.
Reply↴ • uid:ev8sntoiaRuhi: My emotions are growing really high. I can't wait for Aditi and Ayushmans first emotional conversation
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclv9cRuhi: I can't tell how happy I am. I was waiting a very long time for Aditi and Ayushman's happy ending 😭😭. Finally, It is going to come in the next episode. Thank you. Please keep the love conversation between Ayushman and Aditi long. I will really enjoy the conversation.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclv9cTy Taylor: Damn. The satisfaction is crazy 😍. That bastard akash his disgusting friends and those to bitches who did this to Aditi Should get the worst. They get exactly what they deserved. I would like to see Ayushman makes their life living hell even in prison. May they never know peace.
Reply↴ • uid:1ngz6nahRuhi: Few months ago I read a story "Welcome to Hell". Sadly its gone now for some reasons. I can't find it anymore but it had the best happy ending I ever read. It was a story of a wife who cheated on her husband with many men but ended up captured, tortured but after 6 months her husband and police rescued her. It was the best emotional part. The police men also.cried when she tolf how the gangsters used her to earn money. The husband treated her and took another 6 months for her to get normal. Her father and husband was rich so she made them pay. She transfered them to her nearest jail and did everything what they did to her. It was the most perfect story i ever read. I'm feeling that kind of vibes from this story but no story can be that perfect like 'Welcome to hell" I should've saved it.
• uid:7b6jlclv9cWohooo: Perfect idea by Vijy. While Ayushman and Riya wait outside. Aditi was being rp by wardboy inside. Perfect end of this story. Instead of Aditi , Ayushman fall for Riya as he is not interested in Loose pusy girl Aditi anymore.
Reply↴ • uid:2vnjds6i9Ty Taylor: No. I want aditi and ayshman togather. Don't ruin the final part
• uid:1ngz6nahTy Taylor: Ayushman loves aditi. Not his body. Ayushman will make aditi happy amd give her the best life a girl dream of
• uid:1ngz6nahWohooo: Who accept girl in real life who was fkd or raped. Even in real life, it's girls body what matters.
• uid:gyxewhychwkRuhi: Wohooo you should be ashamed. What if she was your sister? I'm a girl too. No girl wants to be raped on her own will. Aditi wanted to end herself. She only wanted to make her parents happy who did a lot for her. She deserves happiness. Aditi never wanted to be raped. Let Aditi have the happy ending she deserves. I know its a story but I really want to see Aditi and Ayushman togather.
• uid:7b6jlclv9cBiboy: There is no chemistry between riya and ayush. Ayush loves aditi and riya also care for aditi. Aditi is the reason riya came to save her in a danger situation like this
• uid:ev8sntoiaArushi: No. Absolutely not
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Roy: It is an excellent part but where is the best scene when Ayushman take care of Aditi and tells Aditi how much he loves her. Infact Riya should also thank Aditi because of Aditi she is also free now. I can't tell you how excited I will when Aditi gets up and she gets to know how Ayushman protected Aditi. Where is the romantic scene bro?
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbVijy: Nah, forget about romantic scene. Juat imagin Aditi by seeing her beauty, hospital ward boy rp her inside ward while she was unconscious. That can make it perfect ending. Aditi should realize she born just to get rp by all. She don't deserve happiness. I got hard just by imaging this scene. Plz author make Aditi rp by hospital staff
• uid:1eika8z3yv1mTy Taylor: I support roy's Idea. Please make the best happy ending. No ward boy or no Security guard
• uid:1ngz6nahRoy: Hell no vijy. We most of us want happy ending. Aditi had enough. No please.. Don't do this author. Please
• uid:o0hvmilhrbNatalia: Keep your mouth shut vijy
• uid:1o1xb9lzrc.: Perfect
Reply↴ • uid:1m5fqgz20dTango: What is perfect??? Juat read above suggestion by Vijy. That's what looks like perfect ending. Ward boy rp her and record her. Aditi should realize that she was only to get rp by all. Why to show her happiness.
• uid:2vnjds6i9Alexa: Finally the trauma is over. Its time for the best part of the story. Ayushman and Aditi romantic first interaction. It will be my favourite part of this story for sure 😍😍 Gratitude showing, thanks giving, expressing each others feeling and more. Please author make It perfect. Next part is going to be my favourite part (2nd best is this part)
Reply↴ • uid:1360jpvm9dAlexa: The best part is yet to come guys. The romantic interaction between Aditi and Ayushman 😍. The meet up we all are waiting for. Aditi showing how grateful she is for saving her And then Ayushman blush and says how much he loves aditi and how everything is over now. A bright future is waiting for Aditi with Ayushman. Can't wait...
Reply↴ • uid:1360jpvm9dTipsy: Everyone deserves a father like Ayushman's father. He is a very calm and intelligent person. He made a brilliant plan and Ayushman and Riya executed the plan brilliantly. I guess I have to wait another day for the happy ending that I'm waiting for. I really appreciate this part.
Reply↴ • uid:t2pu7w4xiaAlexa: Everybody deserves a friend like Riya too and also a husbanf like Ayushman. Aditi is so lucky.
• uid:1360jpvm9dMashruba: I think this is the best part of the story. Big clapping for ayushman's father. Dude is a fucking genius
Reply↴ • uid:ev8snuoidJK: Best character is Security guard. He doing things which I used to do with girls in my dream. But end of the story is worst. Why you make Aditi end up in hospital.
• uid:1d5i7kasfp6nJK: Plz make next part in which Akash plan revenge, and he he hired goons from jail to rape her. Rape session which became her last day of life
• uid:1d5i7kasfp6nJK: Plz write next story with they all plan to take revenge
• uid:1d5i7kasfp6nJK: Revenge by making Aditi and Riya both pay
• uid:1d5i7kasfp6nJK: Rp session which took theire soul out.. bro plz do this
• uid:1d5i7kasfp6nTipsy: Shut up you sick psycho
• uid:t2pu7w4xiaTipsy: The best part for me is when Ayushma saves Aditi and take her to the hospital. Second best part is how Riya and Ayushman came to save Aditi. And the third best part for me is how caring Ayushman's father is
• uid:t2pu7w4xiaNinja Turtle: Same. Even I like the way how security guard bang Aditi. Before ending story, you should have show some more scene between guard and Aditi. Security guard has my respect 🙏. A True man.
• uid:2vnjds6i9Ninja Turtle: Aditi deserve more hard fuck session then this.
• uid:2vnjds6i9Alexa: The best part is yet to come. The romantic interactions between Aditi and Ayushman. The meet up we all are waiting for. Aditi showing how grateful she for saving her And then Ayushman blush and says how much he loved aditi. Ayushman dosen't care if aditi is raped by countlesd for almost a year but the sheer love.
• uid:1360jpvm9d.: Yes. Aditi is Rescued and those bastards are in jail for all their life. Exactly what I wannted. Now lets see what happens next between Ayushman and Aditi. And no we don't want that security guard back. The security guard show be in jail forever as well. Never show that security Guard ever again please.
• uid:1m5fqgz20dRoy: Wtf no. No more security guard or akash or his friends.
• uid:o0hvmilhrbP230: No..
• uid:t2pu7waqriP230: oh man. this is truely one of the best twist ever. I start liking Riya and Ayushman. they're awsome.
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0fic.: Aditi is awsome too
• uid:1m5fqgz20dArushi: Aditi is also awsome. Wait for next chapter please.
• uid:4bmz0tu0k09Gabriel: Excellent chapter.
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